Little Red Animatic

i think i managed to convey the concept with this animatic of a scene. but the problem that there are too many of the girl from the side or straight on is still there, but i do think that the music i used fitted perfectly. the music i used had a fun little effect called shepherds note, which is a series or rising notes that are replaced with set or rising notes to create a seemingly endless rising pitch. this music is how i intend to create the tension, along with the visuals.
now i might be relying on the shepherds note a little too much but it works so well and it will be able to cover up any of the failures on my part