epic skip cycle

this is a skip cycle, the motion of this one is really smooth, i put it on ones, which is why, and maybe unnecessary. the form of the skip does seem to be very good, and combining that with the fluid motion, the skip does look very good. however the main critisim that i got was that the form of the figure boils, which is a result of not properly redrawing the figure, and the highlighting, which is compounded by it being on ones, however i added a kinf of follow through with the hair and waist cloth thing, which adds to the motion of the figure. this added motion with the hair does make it look like it is going everywhere, but that is how hair moves with such motion, and the how the cloth moves smoothly and nicely with the up and down motion, just works. and finaly the dded florish with the motion of the axe on the return up, it is hard to see if you have to keep on pressing play to rewatch, but the axe's different path up from the right arm is horizontal to the camera, almost mimicking the blurred motion to elude to fast motion, which was a happy accident.
over all i think it works and looks great however, the teacher said the animation method is a too difficult a method to get right with a beginner animator.