the frames of the pirate storyboard, unfortunately after the hand in i lost the original full page images so i cannot give the dialogue to go with it, but i'll add the animatic so you can experience it your self instead these are pen and pencil on paper, its the same problem i have with storyboards, i need more dynamic shots, like those of the captain and less level shots, and allow more close ups to allow for better acting, again there just needs to be a few frames in between to further illustrate whats going on to allow the viewer to understand and not just me. another problem i found out half way through was that it would help so much if i used a standard template, but i had to stick with my version because then it would be more consistent, so next storyboard it will be in a standard template.